Tobanaman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Morgue]

heh

Very wierd and very good, I loved it, sorry to say there is a bunch of fucktards that review alot though, but anyway, I liked it, the what i think were sound clips from a training video for workplace clenleyness worked as a great base for the flash and your art styling really helped the whole deal a long way, your music choices were good, well cept the william tell overture, but i can over look that lol, a little cliched but i guess you might have been going for that there, heh, uhm what else, best of luck on future flashes and all, i dont really have anything i can say was not good on it, oh wait, the um going down the hall thing with the checkered floor looked kind of wierd, but thats hard to do, i cant do it so i wont say it was bad heh, um yeah good job

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

I've always loved the William Yell Overture.

I'm addicted to old chase music.

[Calderbank 2]

heh

Pretty good, i was noticing that it didnt look like a flash movie and more of a real cartoon heh, one thing though that i notice, seems as if your making this cartoon only to be the next homestar or something, (the link to the cafe press) really makes this seem less of a genuine type of thing, other than that, um cool on the music, its not easy to compose a song much less one thats funny, so props, um lets see, pretty funny nice job, i'll give it a 5/5

EdibleCastle responds:

the next homestarrunner? me? what? tons of people own cafepress shops. how should that lower the standard of the submission? I didnt make my last 6 cartoons to be the 'next homestarrunner' (by the way, he's a cartoon character, how can I be like him?) and neither did I with this one.

[I Just Want To Get A Nap]

hm

animation was really good, music was the main focus of the toon i would think, it was done well, there are some leveling problems though, the vocals are too quiet, if all of this was done ironically and sarcastically then it was really funny, good job

mlaskaris responds:

Thanks!

The vocals being quiet might have something to do with your EQ/Speaker settings...

-mlaskaris

[Zelda The Forgotten Tales]

bah

The use of a cussword at the end of a sentence does not necessarily make the sentence funny, the ending was really abrupt, maybe the boulder could of been a giant goron? link had no hair but that doest take anything away, just pointing that out, the bubbles were very well done, you need better sound effects, just work on the script alot,

CapitanSean responds:

I will work on that. Thanks

[Fourth of July Collab]

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Eh, all the clips could of been longer and not just loops with snes or genisis music in the background, the only part i liked was the violin part man, lol it made me cringe but i love it

TearClock responds:

k fag.

[Majin Vegetto: Episode 3]

best looking DBZ flash i've seen

Very good, it look almost exactly like a real DBZ, the fighting too, not bad at all, if you need help with any voices (which by the way were pretty authentic in this here flash) i'll be glad to help, i can do a decent piccolo heh :D

Majin-Ryan responds:

hehe thanks man:D, yeah i will be needing Piccolo but nearer to the end of the series, i'll be sure to ask ya if you wanna do the voice for him if ya want:)

[LoZ - The Final Link]

pretty cool

It was a really cool and nicely animated flash, i wouldnt exactly call it a LOZ flash, but hey wtf, the running could of been animated a little cooler, and the sword stuff could of had more variety in the sounds instead of just the one "sssshing" and one "thud" but thats coo, music was cool, hmm ganons face kind of looked funky but thats cool as well, not bad, in fact i liked it, heh

LeviFolds responds:

cool